Writing Assessment Topic


by A. W.

TABLE OF CONTENTS:
1. My Dog Lacey
2. The Night I Met Huck Fin
3. Book Report


Writing Assessment, January 2000


1. My Dog Lacey
by A.W.

TOPIC: Tell a true story about a person or an animal that you will remember for a long time.

When I was about 5 years old my mom, my brothers, my sister, and I went to the store I think it was safeway. When we walked up to the doors there were some people standing by a box. So we walked over to them. There was a dog in the box. She was for free. So we took her.

But we still had to go grocery shoping. So we took her in with us. We hide her in a jacket. My little brother who was only about 1 in a half years old gave it away by almost sitting on her and my little sister who was only about four years old Harley your gonna squish the dog But the lady at the cash register didn't care she just smiled.

When we got home we were all scared of her. I stayed scared of her for a long time until my parents taught me not to be scared. that was about four years ago.

Where we lived pets were not allowed. When we first got her we lived in Woodburn. Then we moved to Hubbard, then back to Woodburn. then to Texas then to Salem, then to were we live now in Woodburn.

But over Christmas vacation one night we decided to go eat pizza for dinner. When we came back we found her lying dead in the driveway. Now the only thing we have left of her is banjo and to other puppies that we are trying to get ride of. But we wont get ride of banjo because hes from Lacey, hes my memories of her.

The end.



STATEWIDE ASSESSMENT PROGRAM: WRITING, 5th Grade (1999-2000)

2. The Night I Met Huck Fin
by A. W.

Im writing this paper to tell you about the time I met Huck Fin. Well it all started when I was taking a walk in the forest. It was dark. Then I saw a river and there in the middle was Jacksonville Island. Then I saw someone in a raft. It was Huck Fin.

So I asked him to give me a ride to Jacksonville Island with him. He said o.k. hop in so I did and he rode over to Jacksonville Island. Were we tide the raft to a tree with a rope Huck got from paps supplies. Then he lit the fire, and told me the hole story about how he put pigs blood on the floor of paps cabin and took all of the supplies, to make it look like someone murdered him and robed all of the supplies. He also told me about how he had been living on the island. How he had to hunt and fish to get food to eat.

Then he turned to me and asked were I lived. So I told him in Woodburn Oregon. He did not no were that was. I ate catfish for dinner with him then he took the raft and drove me back to the woods. Then I waved by as he drifted away on his raft. Well thats what happened when I meet Huck Fin. the end.


3. Book Report