Writing Assessment Topics


by C.P.

TABLE OF CONTENTS:
1. Hit in the Head with a Golf Ball
2. The Coolest Time
3. Book Report


Writing Assessment, January 2000


1. Hit in the Head with a Golf Ball
by C.P.

TOPIC: Tell a true story about a time a friend or family member did something unexpected or surprising.

One Day On Mothers Day in Utah all of my family was in side listening to the radio, but not my brother. He was out side practicing hitting the golf ball as far as he could. He was out there for about three hours and we were in for about three hours. Then he came in and we opened up her presents.

Then Richard wanted to show mom how far he could hit the golf ball. so mom stood by the door and when Richard hit ball it went the wrong way. It went towards my mom and hit her in the head.

So she came in and my dad said hurry lets take you to the hospital. She tried finding her shoes but she was in so much pain that she went with out them. Then he called us when they got to the hospital. They told us we dint have to go to School tomorrow. Then after being in the hospital she was fine.


2. The Coolest Time
by C. P.

STATEWIDE ASSESSMENT PROGRAM: WRITING, 5th Grade (1999-2000)
TOPIC: 7. Imagine that you have the chance to meet a character from a book. Make up a story about what happens.
MODE: Imaginative

One day I met Tom Soyer and Huckle Berry Finn. It was the cooles thing in the world. First we went on a shipin the wavy ocean. We went fishing and cought some stirgen. Then we seen some dolphinns racing the ship. After all that we were back on land.

On land we played surd fights and hidding o seek. then we went to go get something to eat. We ate apples,candy and a half a pear. Then we got a beverage but we just had lemonaid. After having a snack we went to Jacksons Island and met Jim. I thought he was very nice.

Then they stated to tell me some storys. some were funny some were scary. He made up most of them. Then after all that fun it was time for me to go home. Thats the story of me meeting Tom Soyer, Huckle Berry Finn and Jim.


3. Book Report